Saturday, 23 May 2015

Telling my Story

On Friday 15th of May we had the Junior School cross-country. We ran hard in the mud and the puddles; some of us even ran up and down Cycle Mountain!
We decided to tell our cross-country stories. We have done this in two ways. Firstly we wrote our story. We used our senses to help add some details to our writing. We thought about what we could see, what we could hear, what we could feel and how we felt in our heart.
We also told our story in ‘code’. With Carolyn we thought about how we can use paint and symbols to share our story. Again we thought about what we could see, what we could hear, what we could feel and how we felt in our heart.

Success Criteria:
  • Plan my writing
  • Add details to my writing
  • Create a code to tell my story
  • Speak clearly and with expression as I tell my story

How I am going
Plan my writing
Kerri thinks
 
 


Add details to my writing
Kerri thinks

 


Create a code to tell my story
Kerri thinks
 
 


Speak clearly and with expression as I tell my story
Kerri thinks

 
 


Reflection

I really like: that you had to make your story a secret so that no one else knew it.

I think I need to practice: speaking with more expression.

Something that really helped me was: practising reading my story lots and getting better every time.

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